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Timeless Affliction Part3 by =lovesemoguys:iconlovesemoguys:



rushing and moving.
in a hurry, but nowhere
to go. in and out,
flashes of light
and moments of never ending
dark, voices i can not
place and people
i am unable to name.
can not move, held here,
yet moving faster than i have
in my whole entire life.

and white, pure heavenly white,
shuffled and moved, rushes along
now. but its all so vague,
its all so unreal,
meaningless.
©2008-2010 =lovesemoguys
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part three

part one
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and two

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:iconnoisymother:
Intriguing . . . interesting concept.

Trust you to write a story in such an unusual way.

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"Jim walked into the elevator and my jaw dropped," he recalled. "This guy was the most beautiful, sultry, pouty-looking bruiser I'd ever seen in my life."

'he' being Todd Haynes
:iconlovesemoguys:
haha yes..i rather like it though

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*hitobitophotography
:iconnoisymother:
As do I . . .

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"Jim walked into the elevator and my jaw dropped," he recalled. "This guy was the most beautiful, sultry, pouty-looking bruiser I'd ever seen in my life."

'he' being Todd Haynes
:iconlovesemoguys:
it is one of the better ideas ive had

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*hitobitophotography

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